(This is a diagram for a part that is farther down.
Pleace click on it. It will be more readeble.)
Hy!
Today in class we first redid the lab we did last class because it didn't really work.
Than we talked about pigments and how we see colors.
Our next theme was photosynthesis and respiration. While we were talking some of the test tubes popped.
Here is a song about photosynthesis:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tSHmwIZ9FNw
This will tell you what photosynthesis.
Celliar Respiration: (not breading)
-happens in cells
-1st stage: (happens in the cytopats)
× takes the foodand breaks it down into smaller molecules (small energy produce
× sends CHO (charbohydrates), proteins, and fats to the cell to be used as energy.
× takin glucos and providing energy.
-2nd: (happens in the mitochondria)
× glokos + oxigen = reaction (no light)
× produces a lot of energy
× C6H12O6 + 6O2 = 6CO2 + 6H2O + energy
After this we did genedicts , because we have flover babies( these are sackes of flower that you have to carry around everywhere like baby) and they nead faces. We were flipping coins so we couldfinde out hove our baby will look.
The homework was to draw the face. http://zagreb.ceesa.net/
The next scribe is Val.
Hi Terez,
ReplyDeleteI think that your Scribe Post was great. Some reasons I thought it was great was because you used colors well, I think you linked to the AISZ Moodle Site, and I think you had great pictures explaining what we did in Science Class. Its also great that you explained what respiration meant and what some other words meant. Even though it was great I still think you could have done a couple things to improve the post. One thing you could have done to improve the post was you could have used a font that is easier to read on white. Another mistake was some of the spelling. You spelled hi wrong at the start. But your English has improved since the beginning of the year. Another aspect you could have improved is the pictures. Don't get me wrong they were very well related to the science of what we did in class. But I feel that they were a little hard to read. I think that you could have explained the 2nd stage of respiration a little bit better. You also forgot to put up a link to something that will help us study the topic at hand. So I think the post was good except a few mistakes here and there. These were scientific, grammatic, and spelling.
Reza
Hey Terèz,
ReplyDeleteI think there were some mistakes in your posts, although it was well organised and for sure you put much dedication into it. The main mistakes were spelling ones, others are about the pictures; you should watch out the size of these and the legibility, even thought they were related to science. One more thing, you should have gone a bit more far out about the sheets we corrected and their mistakes, about the explanation of cellular respiration, photosynthesis. Also, you should revise the explanation of the Venn Diagram we created in class, and explained all the content, since it was not legible. Although it was good that you linked Moodle and the link of the photosynthesis song.
Gio
Hey Terez good job with your post.
ReplyDeleteI like it because there are a lot of information and you even put a picture about the vendiagram about photosystesis and the cellular respiration. I do not like the colour that you used for write because is a litle hard to write and you also make some errors in your picture.
You also put chemical formula and I like it.
Good job
Davide
Hello Terez,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your use of picture and the fact that you used several different choices of color for the text. A bad thing is the color choice, they are too light to be put on a white background. Another problem is that you did some spelling mistakes, but it is great that you put the two stages of photosynthesis. Overall the post is well done, good job!
All the best,
Cip
Hey Terez!
ReplyDeleteI liked that you put a diagram and a link to Moodle on your blog post. I think your colors were too bright, because it was hard to read. You also made some spelling mistakes. I liked that you gave the cellular respiration formula. Also, you mentioned pigments and colors but you didn't explain what we did in class involving them. Overall, I think this is a good first scribe post!
Hello Terez,
ReplyDeleteGreat Post! I think you did a great job on the paragraphs. They were easy to read since they had nice spacing. Though, I found the colors that you used really hard to read since they were reallt light. I like that you put the two pictures, since they explained what you did in class. I found the first picture hard to read since it was very blurry. I think that it was great that you put in the song. Also, the link to moodle was very helpful for people that forgot their homework. You had some grammar and spelling mistakes. I also think that you could have been a bit more detailed in talking about the different things that you did in class. Maybe you could have put another link to a website showing a video or explaining what you did in class. Overall, though, great first post!
Davide
Hi Teréz, this is a great post that covers everything we did in class! I liked your picture and the venn diagram, which is extremely helpful! Some things you could've improved were your spelling and grammar, since there were many mistakes. Also, the color you used was very hard to read. The venn diagram was blurry, but when I clicked on it it wasn't, which was really good. This post is really good for your first time, and you did very well considering that you just started learning English! Great job! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Terez,
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice post! It was easy to read except for the colors! It was a nice choice of blue, but they were a little to bright so it was hard to understand what was going on. You added pictures and sites which is very nice. I think one of the photos was blurry so it was hard to look at it and understand what was going on. Like Viktor said, you did a very nice job.
Good Job :)
Hi Terez
ReplyDeleteGood job on your first post. Here were somethings you might want to improve. There were some grammatic errors, and the color was hard to read. You could have explained what the venn diagram was and why we did it. The picture was a nice touch. There were some spelling errors too. You said that the venn diagram was explained but it was not explained.
Over all it was a good first post.
Terez - nice work on here for your first Scribe Post, although there is room for improvement. First off you must spell check and grammar check before you finalize a post on a blog - you have many errors here! Secondly, you have not done your labels/tags correctly. You have your name and Scribe Post, but you also need to include the subject matter we were covering, not the date of the class. Your coverage of Cellular respiration is thorough and I like the image you have posted there for it. plus, inclusion of the Venn Diagram we did in class was helpful. But you could have explained the two different labs we focused on with more depth; the yeast + sugar lab for fermentation and the genetics lab to make the faces of the babies. your font was a good size and clear choice, but the color in places made this really hard to read. So, as I said above, some good stuff in here and some room for improvement in the future. Overall, nice job on your first ever post! ~Ms. D.
ReplyDeleteokay i am only in 6th grade and i know that there are some major spelling errors for instance ingredients is spelled wrong. Come on i mean really but good job anyways
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